Talk: Project Character Art/Archive 1

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Hollyleaf (KI) ~ Declined

File:Hollyleaf_(KI).png So, here it is, I guess XD. Comments? ~Fallen 15:17, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...make the background transparent. Other than that, it's good. =) Patte-Lune

I deleted the background. Approved? ~Fallen

Make her a little darker? She is a black cat. :P If not, this is great~ --Twi

Sand wants to put in that...this isn't the right kit blank....o3o --Twi

I know, Twi. We're changing the blanks, I haven't gotten around to it yet. Patte-Lune

Okay. ^^ --Twi

Re-uploaded. Burned to make it darker. Yes I know some parts were burned too much and are too dark. I will lighten them in the next re-upload. ~Fallen

Re-uploaded. Burned a bit more, and highlighted some parts of it. ~Fallen

I think it looks perfect. CBA? Patte-Lune

Lovely. I see nothing wrong with it. Approved. ~Sand

Should there be an archive page for approved chararts? --Twi 23:53, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. Could you make one? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 23:56, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts.Patte-Lune

Ashfur (KI) ~ Declined

File:Ashfur_(KI).png Here he is. D`aww.This is probably how he was before he went insane.Comments?~Fallen

Darken the shading a bit and lighten the ear pink. He didn't go insane, we went me >:D ~Sand

Reuploaded- Darkened shading, lightened earpink. ~Fallen

I see nothing wrong with this. CBA? ~Sand

Approved. =) Patte-Lune

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Ivypool (KI) - Declined

File:Ivypool (KI).png Bah. Terrible. Comments? --Twi

B-beautiful *Tear*. Maybe lighten the tail a bit more. ~Fallen

Reuploaded - Thanks, Fallen. --Twi 23:49, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Bah. I shall get the waste. --Twi 23:50, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-re-uploaded - Woo~ Anyway, changes may or may not be showing. --Twi 23:52, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful. I see nothing wrong. CBA? Patte-Lune

Me neither. Approved! Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:16, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts.Patte-Lune

Leafpool (KI) ~ Declined

File:Leafpool (KI).png Comments? (And I'm sorry Hazel. I didn't know you wanted to do her, but, I didn't want to have spent all that time tearing my room apart looking for my tablet pen for nothing...) --Twi 03:27, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Add earpink. Patte-Lune

Lovely. Darken the stripes and yes, add ear pink Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:34, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - --Twi 03:38, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I love it. CBA? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:47, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

It really is wonderful. Approved. Patte-Lune

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Crowfeather (KI) - Declined

File:Crowfeather (KI).png 8D Crowy looks so cute as a kit~ <3 Comments? --Twi 01:22, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Adorable. I don't know if I should CBA this or not, but I see nothing wrong with it. =) Patte-Lune

Well me neither. Since you said about CBAing I'll do it. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:16, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

It's been long enough. Approved. Patte-Lune

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Spottedleaf (KI) ~ Declined

File:Spottedleaf.KI.pngThere. Comments? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 23:54, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Gawjus~ Define the shading? --Twi 23:55, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Maybe make the dark spot on her back more black, if its a part of the fur, but if its shading, even it out.~Fallen

Re-uploaded. okay better now? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 00:06, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. I see nothing else wrong. ^.^ --Twi 00:22, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed, Twi. CBA? Patte-Lune

Sorry to interrupt the CBA, but she should have dapples. I don't see them, but if she has them it's fine. Patte-Lune

It is there but it's hard to see because of the blurring and the shading. Continuing CBA Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:16, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

It's been long enough. Approved. Patte-Lune

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Scourge (KI) ~ Declined

File:Scourge_(KI).pngEven little killers can be cute :3 Any comments? ~Fallen

Aww! <3 Condense the earpink to the ear and erase it from the top and around the eye. Lovely Patte-Lune

Reuploaded-I assumed you meant erase the part of the earpink that was too close to the eye and tip of the ear. Condensed it, also.~Fallen 02:15, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

What's that...purple thing? Anyway darken the shading a little bit. And why is that thing under the paw there? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:16, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

It's his collar, Sandeh. It's fine, although the purple does confuse me. Patte-Lune

Well is shouldn't be there because that's his body. Remove it to be correct. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:33, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Also, remove the tag, seeing as, if it were real, it would be hanging too low from the actual collar. --Twi 03:34, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I deleted the tag. The purple is part of the back of his collar, and darkened shading.~Fallen 03:43, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sandeh told you to remove the back of the collar...other than that, it's fine. Patte-Lune

Re-uploaded-Removed back of collar. ~Fallen 04:04, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks good. CBA? Patte-Lune

Lovely Approved. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 17:53, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts.Patte-Lune

Lilykit (KI) ~ Declined

File:Lilykit_(KI).pngTortoiseshell and white :3 Used these colors since it didnt specify which ones. ~Fallen 14:34, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Purrty. Define the shading. Patte-Lune

Reuploaded ~Fallen 15:22, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white on the tail and blend it with the other colors. Patte-Lune

Reuploaded- Smudged white with orange and black. ~Fallen 17:17, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 17:48, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Patte-Lune

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Tigerstar (KI) ~ Declined

File:Tigerstar.KI.pngOkay I wish the stripes where thinner! It would be more space for my epical tabbies >:D Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 04:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Gawjus~ Blur the pale muzzle a little more? --Twi 04:14, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Done. Anything else? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 17:48, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I would say take the smudge tool and kind of branch out the pale muzzle. Y'know what I mean? Patte-Lune

Okay done. Better? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 21:26, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great. CBA? Patte-Lune

Approved Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 00:54, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Firestar (KI) ~ Declined

File:Firestar (KI).png Here he is! Comments? Patte-Lune

Nice~! ^.^ Define the shading. --Twi 02:32, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink a little bit. Maybe darken the stripes. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:16, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Patte-Lune

I see nothing wrong with it. CBA? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 17:48, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Senior Warriors are leads, right? If not, revert this Good job. It's been long. Approved. (; --Twi 00:58, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Hawkfrost (KI) ~ Declined

File:Hawkfrost.KI.pngEvil while sleeping. Comments? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 18:42, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white fur on the belly. Patte-Lune

Reuploaded. Doesn't really look different but it is. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 00:52, January 23, 2012 (UTC)'

I love this. Maybe add some more stripes to the face Add that one stripe on the right cheek and it'll be perfect. (; --Twi 01:11, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Okay done. Looks like his daddy now! Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 01:27, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yup~ Beautiful, Sand~ I see nothing else wrong. CBA? --Twi 01:32, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Well I don't like doing this, but Approved. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:26, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Seedkit (KI) ~ Declined

File:Seedkit (KI).png Bleh. Comments? --Twi 18:34, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it along with the fur. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 18:42, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - --Twi 01:04, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely as always, young padawan. CBA? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 01:10, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. Patte-Lune

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Bluestar (KI) ~ Declined

File:Bluestar (KI).png There she is! Comments? Patte-Lune

D'awwwww~! <3 She's so cute~! Could you saturate it a tad? Her description says she's a "blue-gray" she-cat. --Twi 03:51, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ~Patte-Lune

Blur the shading a little bit more and dull the ear pink. This is good. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 04:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ehh...Patte-Lune

This looks lovely. Could you dull the earpink just a little more? --Twi 16:41, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ~Patte-Lune

If there are no further comments, CBA? --Twi 02:40, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's been long. Approved. --Twi 18:01, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Eaglekit (KI) ~ Declined

File:Eaglekit.pngIs he good? Stalking you. What you need? 17:27, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Nice. Delete the white background, and make the ear pink neater. Add shading and highlights if you didnt.~Fallen

^^Added picture to topic, Added correct topic name. ~Fallen

It looks like you saved it as a .jpeg. Re-upload it as a .png, please. Patte-Lune

Darken the shading a tad and maybe blur the ear pink. ~Sand

Yo, are you workin' on this? It's been a while without an upload. --Twi 19:36, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work and the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Dovewing (KI) ~ Declined

File:Dovewing.png Constructive criticism? Stalking you. What you need? 00:20, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the background transparent. --Twi 00:22, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I put a link in the title. Make the background transparant and make the Earpink Neater. ~Fallen

Switch the file to .png {{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Silvereye1/Sig}} 00:10, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work and the fact we have new linearts.Patte-Lune

Jayfeather (KI) ~ Declined

File:Jayfeather_(KI).pngJayfeather! Isn't he adorable? ~Hazel

Yeah, he is~ <3 Make the background transparent. --Twi 03:10, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Don't forget to sign! Anyway darken the shading and...add ear pink xD Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:16, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Please rename this Jayfeather (KI).png. Patte-Lune

Did it! Can someone turn the background transparent for me, please? Thanks! ~Hazel

Once you make the background transparent, I'll CBA it. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 17:48, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I made it transparent for her since she asked. Fill in the earpink on the ear to the left of us and also fill in the bottom of the ear to the right of us. Patte-Lune

Blur the face shading? --Twi 21:49, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work and the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Princess (KI) ~ Declined

File:Princess(kit).png Princess, Firestar's sister... As a fluffy kitten! ~ Hazeleye 03:44, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Take away the collar and tag, and add earpink. Blur her white markings. Patte-Lune

Blur or smudge the marking, add earpink, and add shading to the face. :) ~Fallen 03:55, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Done! ~Hazeleh

Did you upload it over the last file? It looks like you didn't...Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 17:48, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I did ~Hazeleye

Okay then blur everything over again. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 21:55, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Also, rename this Princess (KI).png Patte-Lune

Declined due to lack of work and the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Squirrelflight (KI) ~ Declined

File:Squirrelflight_(KI).png *Groan* So crappy >.> Comments? ~Fallen 01:22, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Naw, naw, it looks nice. Blur the "highlights". --Twi 01:26, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work and the fact we have new linearts. Patte-Lune

Sorreltail (KI) ~ Declined

File:Sorreltail_(KI).pngSorrelkit <3 Patte-Lune

:) Make the black patch on her tail darker, and even out the patches with the other colors a bit. ~Fallen 14:45, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Workin' on this, Mooneh? o3o --Twi 00:09, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

One more day. There's been no upload since the 29th. Also, if your working on this, make the earpink look less purple. --Twi 02:49, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

*sarcasm* I thought PCA was closed. Patte-Lune

Declined due to the fact we have new linearts. Mooneh

Jayfeather (KI) ~ Declined

File:Jayfeather_(KI).png Yeah... It does suck major eggs... ~Help Lies in the Hazel...

It's so good!!SpoUser talk:.Spottedclaw 04:19, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, blur the stripes a lot. ~Mooneh~ Just a 'paw...

Doesn't this have to be declined because we have new linearts? ~Fallen 21:58, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yep. Declining and archiving now. Mooneh

Rainwhisker (KI) ~ Declined

Here he is, using the new lineart. I put it in thumbnail because it is sorta big. Patte-Lune

Blure Blur the shading and tome tone down the earpink. Lovely. --Twi 17:07, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Patte-Lune

No comments in a while - CBA? --Twi 22:40, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. Nice job! --Twi 23:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

This has to be declined due to the fact we have new linearts. {{SUBST:Nosubst|User:.Moonehpaw/Sig}} 21:20, March 8, 2012 (UTC)